He stated self-improvement in particular, three points.
He thinks that it is important to have good looks. For example, hair, nails and beautiful skin. It takes a lot of money to get more beauty, but he says that we make our own identities. Second, it's about hobbies. He thinks that having hobbies can improve our daily lives. Third, it's about our own goals. Like having our favorite hobbies, to make goals is a good way to inspire.
His presentation made me understood well because he formed construction clearly. To be better presentation, he should speak a loud to hear everyone in the group and give eye-contact for audiences.
◎Hikari
She stated cosmetic surgery about moles. The purposes which people want to take away their moles are several. It is to be prettier than present, to get self-confidence. However, there is another purpose to take surgery. Sometimes people have malignant tumor or benign tumor. She told us merits and demerits for removing moles. The demerit is to lose their attractive features and to get risks involved. I think we should decide carefully.
Her presentation was easy to understand because she used effective pictures. To be better presentation, she should state her opinion obviously.
◎Taku
He stated self-improvement. He told us the way to have good thinking. He thinks saying positive words makes us happier. And praising myself is a good way to inspire. I want to imitate his positive thinking.
His presentation was attractive for me and easy to understand for everyone. It was good to take eye-contact.
To be better, he should speak more slowly with a loud voice and use some pictures to help your ideas.
◎Maria
She told us many ways to improve ourselves. One of her opinions about self improvement is to find good points of ourselves. Studying much harder can get more knowledge and we get to have self-confidence. To change our looks is also one of the self improvements. So, she agreed people take cosmetic surgery.
Her presentation was easy to listen and she used English fluently. Eye-contacts was very good. To be better, she should focus on the theme narrower and use pictures.
◎My presentation
I'm always careful to use some slides or papers to help my opinion. I' ve done presentation for 5minutes or shorter, so I was confused to do longer. I should have make constructed statements. And I felt shortage of my English and I couldn't tell my opinion enough. Next time, I want to give everyone clearly presentation.
