Success
◎Taku
He told us about a great person, Edison, Thomas Alva. He is famous for the invention of an incandescent light. However, he was not elite person. He studied alone in a library. He was not only smart but also, made much efforts. I thought that never giving up and keeping on making efforts is very important to succeed in, after hearing Taku's presentation.
◎Saya
She told about her experiences related to the success. Refer to her, meeting English seems to be her success. She has started learning English since she was a junior high school student. Then, she wasn't so good at studying English, compared with a her friend who has been learning since elementary school student. To keep up with her friends, she studied harder than before. She told us the key to success.
①Having a heart of competing.
②Don't hesitate.
I want to memorize these words in my heart.
◎Ayari
She talked about the succeeding in life. She told us the maxim to success.
①Be confident about myself.
②Be kind.
③Try something I've never once.
④Live my way independently.
⑤Meet a person of fortune.
These maxim are very important to success, I think too.
◎Mana
She introduced the way of succeeding she thinks.
"Setting small goals" seems to be the key to success. She sets some small goals in her everyday lives. She reads books everyday. Accumulation of small efforts leads to success, she said to us. I thought so. I'll make some goals in daily lives.
◎Aya
She told us what was success. She said that achieving the goal was not success. Foe example, becoming rich is not success. She thinks that living with family and keeping health is her success. And also, She said that success was changing people's lives from former President in the U.S. Obama' words. The key to success is 'Never give up' and keep on making efforts.
◎My presentation
I told about my success stories. When I was a junior high school student, I belonged to a brass band club. Firstly, I' ve not read scores at all. My friends and teachers told how to read it politely. I practiced playing the sax harder and harder. I often made mistake, but gradually I became a good player. In my third years of the school, we took part in the contest. Finally we got a gold prize, which we have hoped since I was first year students. Through my experiences, I learned a lot of things. These are my success.
You hold a presentation only by word of mouth but I think it is hard for listeners to understand what you want to say the most, so You should use some picture or statements written on some papers. They will help you to make your presentation more clearly.
ReplyDeleteYou gave your presentation without visual resources. I think that using them is helpful, but also your style is good because we paid attentions to only you. Last week, teacher told me that it is the most important to connect with listeners, so I think your way is effective. But if you use somepicture, audiences can listen to your talk while imaging through some pictures. That's why I suggest using some pictures next time.
ReplyDeleteAlthough you made presentation without picture, your presentation was easy to understand. I learned that it's possible to make good presentation without picture. You should speak clearly, but instead make presentation without picture.
ReplyDeleteI could know your successful experience well in your presentation. I could imagine your experience because I could understand what you want to say. But I think you should prepare more objective success method obtained from your experience.If you add this thing, your presentation will get summary, and your listeners can remember what your presentation was.
ReplyDeleteYour speech was good, but it's not speech, this is presentation. I want you to make powerpoint. Sometimes, I and you were same group. You're contents is always funny and inretesting. Your presentation become better by diong that.
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